One day I was with my aunty, uncle, cousin and sister and we went to Oxford street and I almost died. At first it was very sunny. It was quite busy and all I could hear is just chattering. The only reason I go to oxford street is because it has shops that are really attractive.
After that we did some shopping and bought clothes. Then I saw a toy shop and I shouted “Hamleys!!” So then I went to the shop and had a play with the turbo twister. We came out of the shop and suddenly all I see is a weird looking Man dressed as a monkey stood up still. After about fifteenth seconds he jumped and scared everyone. Next I went to a shop and bought my baby cousin a dress.
When I was walking I saw spider- man and then I got myself face painted, so did my cousin. After I realised that it was a man dressed in a spider-man outfit and got face painted exactly like me.
Ten minutes later we went and ordered some pizza and chilled there for a bit. After we finished our food we were feeling very hot although it was a little bit rainy. So then we went and bought a dessert and i cooled down everyone.
Later on it was dark, cold and a rainy evening and we were going home. So we saw the bus so everyone was telling me to chase for the bus. I ran for the bus and then I tripped and a car came but he stopped emergencily. I fell on a small puddle and just fell under the front bumper of the car. I didn’t injur myself and a lady helped me up. Luckily I was alive and I still got the bus.
Plan:
- Went oxford street
- Did shopping
- Face painting
- Had pizza
- key rings and souvernirs
June 6, 2016 at 5:16 pm
What an intriguing title!
It’s a shame that piece is so short as it has lots of potential for development. There is a big jump between the face painting and the incident where you were nearly run over.
Write a plan to help you develop your ideas fully.